Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;句式变化多样;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
From the chart given above,we can't fail to notice that people with higher degree of education earn much more and have a lower unemployment rate than people who master less knowledge,According to current population survey from Bureau of labor statistics. Three factors are responsible for this phenomenon.For one thing,one who masters wide and profound knowledge have the ability to cope with some issues which is hard for one who has less knowledge to address.For another,the degree of education is,to some extent,bound up with one's ability to study,good personality,so those can't pose a potential threat to company or specific sector.What's more,individuals with higher degree of education deserve to be paid much more,for they are capable of yielding huge dividends for the company and even to the country which will far access the money they gained. From what has been mentioned above,the degree of education is directly related to our job-hunting and the level of salary.so we must enhance the awareness of being educated.Only when we are aware that education exert tremendous effect on us and attach more importance to it,can we get what we want to have.