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As we have read from above,recent years in China,along with the advancement of the society more and more issues have brought to our attention one of which is that"Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will." There is an old saying:"Constant dripping wears away the stone."Why did the stone was wear away by the water?The reason is a strong will.The water was dripped on the stone everyday that the stone was wear away by the water.Nevertheless,is hard to keep doing something in everyday of this process.Because there is a vital for challenge before you have used to doing something.However,only the man who have the strong will,will being a successful man in their own life.For example,the student must with a strong will in their study.Hence,a strong will can effective for they learning.If they don't strive to study.Gradually,they would lack the knowledge of lesson.In result,they can not be successful in their life. As I see it,there is a succeed way to get a successful life.Keeping the strong will.
