2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As we have read from above,recent years in China,along with the advancement of the society more and more issues have brought to our attention one of which is that"Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will." There is an old saying:"Constant dripping wears away the stone."Why did the stone was wear away by the water?The reason is a strong will.The water was dripped on the stone everyday that the stone was wore away by the water.Nevertheless,is hard to maintain doing something in everyday of this process.Because there is a vital for challenge before you have used to doing something. However,only the man who have the strong will,will be a successful man in their own life.For example,the student must with a strong will in their study.Hence,a strong will can effective for they learn.If they don't strive to study.Gradually,they would lack the knowledge of lesson.As a result,they cannot be triumphant in their life. As I see it,there is a succeed way to get a successful life.Maintain the strong will.