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I have a good friend.Her name is Lucy.She is 10 years old girl.She is very beautiful.She has long black hair,two big black eyes and a red mouth.Her voice is better,she is good at singing.She is a clever girl.She speaks English very well.She likes reading books,playing computer game and playing football.She is also nice.She often helps us.Our classmates are like her very much!