题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;适当增加一些复杂句的使用,文章会更棒;全文结构较为严谨。
In our daily life,the basic thing we need to do to have a great relationship is on maintaining trust. On maintaining trust is not just express the true humanity of who we are and who we care,also good for us building a more stable inter bridge which can let us have not quite a few friends.otherwise,if we do not treat others truly ,people can feel it and they may not want to make friends with you so sometimes it would let you in a bad situation.Without friends life just like a fish left the water,it is gloomy.And like an old saying said,life like a mirror that the way we treat others would pay back. So i will be grateful if you guys take my words in the bottom of your heart.My honor.