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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6295
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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trust resembles a pass licence ,giving you easy access to where you want to go. it also provides significant convenience for others. Contradictory, distrust steers away from right way. To keep on maintaining trust is vital element to our society. Examples abound in our life.Parents ,who may distrust their child, will read child's dairy under wrapped. that can fuel a debate and deteriorate their relationship; if we do not maintain trust, we are apt to show unfriendly attitude to strangers as well as be unwilling to give assistance to them, because of fearing hurt ,fearing deceive ; it can occur to our friends alike. Those things beneath the surface are lacking of trust . things will be more smooth , if we overcome such a barrier. the Alipay , Alibaba' payment system , can win the best argument that the firm well deals with the trust problem and spells boom in internet word.

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