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字数:300 满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Knowledge is infinite. From elementary school to university, we have kept learning things from books or beyond books all the time. In school, we can learn things from books; out of school, nature and social can teach us various experiences. However, no matter where we learn things from, what most important is to keep our mind open and active to receive all kinds of experience and education. When learning, we should not merely focus our mind on what we have learnt before. What we need to do is to welcome what we will learn later. For example, when I was in primary school, we began to study English, it is the first time that we come into contact with English, many of my classmates, even schoolmates, and they dislike and resist studying English, it is a common phenomenon at that time. I still remember that they said learning English is unpatriotic. But unlike them, I do not regard learning new things as unpatriotic behavior; on the contrary, it is a newcomer to us, why we do not keep our mind open to welcome it. In my opinion, knowledge is no boundaries; we had better not have prejudice against new things. To tell the truth, success often owes to those who are good at learning and always have a positive attitude toward learning. With the development of world globalization, we must receive something new but it means losing something old.On the consequent, a positive mind can influence one’s fate, especially facing education.