单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
My new teacher is English teacher.Her name is Sally.She is very beautiful.She has long yellow hair,two blue eyes and a red mouth.She always wears dress.Her voice is better.She is good at singing.She is very kind.She often helps us.Our classmates are like her very much.She likes reading books,because she thinks reading books is very interesting.