小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i have a good friend ,she very beautiful and not tall .she not work at the home.we are usually together go shopping and eatting food.she look like of mother. she has a brother.she is 25 year old .she has a noly baby,the baby is 2 year old.these are five people in my family