小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；运用了一些简单从句，但不是很熟练；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

i have a good friend ,she very beautiful and not tall .she not works at the home.we are usually together go shopping and eating food.she looks like of mother. she has a brother.she is 25 Year old .she has a only baby,the baby is 2 Year old.these are five person in my family