2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

Man and Computer In the modern society,computer become more and more popurlar,and fuethermore instead of man.Computer has made a great impact on our life,we use it to do majorty things,such as houseowrk,e-mails and so on.Computer begin to think like man. However,man depend increasingly on the computer.From my perspective,it is dangerous that man will begin to think like the computer.Computer can convinent for human,but if man rely on it all the time,our life won't be able to better,we will become a robot commanded by computer.Today,more and more people can't leave the computer even a second,especially the students use computer as possible as to do anything totally.Man become moer lazier and human's life become a mass. Therefore,the saying,the real danger is man will be insteaded by computer not computer will be man.