2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

In the modern society,computer becomes more and more popurlar,and fuethermore instead of man.Computer has made a great impact on our life,we use it to do majorty things,such as houseowrks,e-mails and so on.Computer begins to think like man. However,man depends increasingly on the computer.From my perspective,it is dangerous that man will begin to think like the computer.Computer can convinent for human,but if man rely on it all the time,our life won't be better,and we will become a machine commanded by computer.Today,more and more people can't leave the computer even a second,especially the students use computer as possible as to do anything totally.Man becomes more lazier and human's life become a mass. Therefore,the saying,the real danger is man will be insteaded by computer not computer will be man.