小学二年级英语作文:My Favourite Teacher

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My favourite teacher is Miss Gao.She teaches us English.She looks yong and beautiful.She always wears a dress.She has long black hair,two big black eyes and a red mouth.She is very clever.She likes reading books,playing sprots and listening to music.Her voice is better.She is good at singing.After class,she often playing with us.Our classmates are like her very much. This is my favourite teacher.She is very friendly for us.