2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

In the modern society,computer becomes more and more popular,and furthermore take the place of the man.Computer has made a great impact on our life,we use it to do majority things,such as houseworks,e-mails and so on.Computer begins to be thought like a man. However,the man depends increasingly on the computer.From my perspective,it is dangerous that the man will begin to be thought like the computer.Computer can convinient for human,but if man rely on it all the time,our life won't be better,and we will become a machine commanded by computer.Today,more and more people can't leave the computer even a second,especially the students use computer for anything totally.Man becomes much lazier and human's life become a mass. Therefore,the saying,the real danger is man will be replaced by computer not computer will be a man.