2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

In the modern society,computer becomes more and more popular,and furthermore take the place of the man.Computer has made a great impact on our life,we use it to do many things,such as house-works,e-mails and so on.Computer starts to be thought like a man. However,the man depends increasingly on the computer.From my perspective,it is dangerous that the man will begin to be thought like the computer.Computer can convenient for human,but if man rely on it all the time,our life won't be better,and we will become a machine commanded by computer.Today,more and more people can't leave the computer just a minutes,especially the students use computer for anything totally.Man becomes much lazier and human's life become a mass. Therefore,the saying,the real danger is man will be replaced by computer not computer will be a man.