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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9562
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
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1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
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复杂句采用很棒;全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇。

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Nowadays,with the development of the internet ,online shopping become a fashion.in customers‘ views ,online shopping can save their time and energy,because they neednt go out to buy commodities,and just make electric order on internet and wait .what’s more ,online shopping is also benificial to sellers, because they neednt go out to rent a special room for products ,just wait electric order from customers and send commodities to customers by express delivery. However, there are some disadvantages about online shopping,for example,people wont know wether the commodities‘ quality is good or not.And internet also offer some people way to deceive. From my perspective,people should be cautious about online shopping,do not be deceived.some advice of mine as follow:customers should know the website on which they want to buy some commodities ,before they buy commodities,and make sure the boss is not a deceiver.last but not least,the government should carry out more law about online shopping to prevent deceivers’ deceit and protect customers‘ benefit.

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