2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；部分学术词汇用的不错，但拼写检查还需加强；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

With rapid social and economic development,the items have lots of type in the market.But it exist servel problems such as excessive packaging.Everything has its reason,it is no exception. The reason for this phenomenon are as follows.On the one hand,nice pack is the frist shopping condition of cousumer.And they think the items have a fine pack equal to fine quality.On the other hand,some merchants prepare a big pack to a little goods and sell people a hige price.Bcause who are morrally corrupt can not resist the temptation of profit. In my view,this behaviour is cheat the cousumer.The cousumer must rational cousum and merchant ought to seek truth from facts.Last but not least,goverment need enfrce relative laws in accordance.Only in this way can cousumer enjoy the pleasure of shoping without worrying about being cheated.