2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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With rapid social and economic development,the items have lots of type in the market.But there exist several problems such as excessive packaging.Everything has its reason,it is no exception. The reason for this phenomenon is as follows.On the one hand,the nice pack is the first shopping condition of cousumer.And they equate the fine pack with fine quality.On the other hand,some merchants prepare a big pack to a little goods and sell people a hige price.Bcause they are morally corrupt can not resist the temptation of profit. In my view,this is act that merchant cheats the consumer.The consumer must rational cousum and merchant ought to seek truth from facts.Last but not least,goverment need enfrce relative laws in accordance.Only in this way can cousumer enjoy the pleasure of shopping without worrying about being cheated.