2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且检查文中的拼写错误。

the online shopping is very popular.more and more people like online shopping .therefore,i like too. there are many advantages.such as it is easy to buy something at home .but many trobrubs. i think you should not buy something on the computer.beaseace it is not safe.maybe you can meet the bad person .they can cheat your money .