一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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absolutely it's a fucking day. In the morning Mum asked me to clean the dirty house, the rubbish slept everywhere and it smelled terrible. It spent me two hours to clean them up. Then, I should finish my damn homework. They were so easy that took me less than 5 minutes to finish them. In the afternoon, my father advised me to play pingpong ball. It was also wasting my time. Finaly, evening came. I could have a rest. So I turn on the fucking TV and sat in the sofa til I felt asleep. What a fucking day!