2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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The online shopping is very popular.More and more person like online shopping .Therefore,i like too. There are many advantages.Such as it is easy to buy something at home .but many trobrubs. I think you should not buy something on the computer.Beacase it is not safe.Maybe you can meet the bad person .They can fool your money.