2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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The online shopping is very popular.More and more person like online shopping.Therefore,i like too. There are many advantages.Such as it is easy to buy something at home.but many trobrubs. I think you should not buy something on the computer.Beacase it is not safe.Maybe you can meet the bad person .They can fool your money.