小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is Xiaotian ,He is older and stronger than me but he dare not fight with me. We were mischievous at younger age , One day we found a snake in the field ,"oh my god" He said. "Don't be afraid we could grasp it to play" I said."It's a good idea I angree with you completely