高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past, There were a lot of fishes in the river and green trees around in my hometown.The apartments were simple and streets were narrow. People worked hard and lived in poorly. And now, High building are here and there. All kinds of cars are runing in the streets. Industry development affect environment around. fishes have disappeared and trees have reduced. So it is urgent to manage the pollution.