高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；熟练使用了一些长难句；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Hometown is that who was born and lived place never fotgot , i was born in a villige which river surrounding and some fishes in it,house simply and street small.pepole live poorly but happy.Many years past.High builing are buit ,bus and car rive in the street,envirnment got worse and worse,tree and fish dispeared,It is the most important that envirnment is clean.