一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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A Busy Day I am a teacher.I work from Monday to Sunday.Beacuse I work in a senior school that it is no weekend.And in Sunday that it is the busiest day.On that day I have 5 lessons.I work hard all the day .I wish that it is 2 to 3 lessons in a day next term.