一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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A Busy Day I am a teacher.I work from Monday to Sunday.Because I work in a senior school that it is no weekend. On Sunday that it is the busiest day.On that day I have five lessons.I work hard all the day.I wish that it is two or three lessons in a day next term.