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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5737
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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作者词汇量积累不错,能较准确地使用学术词汇,单词拼写要仔细;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

With the advent of the information era, people are facing a delimma that "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention." It is a common case that nag advertisements and irrelevant things pours in our screen when we go on line. Many a time, people will easily deviate from the core they intend to search. Nowadays, people usually resort to the data agent for material that will come in handy in their job or lesson. As soon as one click a key word, countless items emerges, which even relates to comercial or entertaining purpose.Furthermore, these IT companies have been proceeding skillful campaign to attract people's attention with fancy words and delightful source, in order to expand their virtual territory. Consequently, the implement like computer or database, suppose to faciliate our task, in the contrary decrease our efficiency. However some external help will be of use in some circumstances, like a database on a specific domain, or definite "key phrase" rather than vague "key word" that will narrow the range of information. It is also recommended to become a premium subscriber to some data agent to get rid of the ads and enjoy the customized service. In these ways, we can be more efficient without distracting by irrelevant information.

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