2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；请增加词汇量的积累，并仔细检查词汇的拼写；连词使用偏少。

Now many parents help children to do everythings that influction childenttobe independent. so in my opoion parent should help children to be independent . Frist,parents should let children to school by they oweslef,and anything don't help they .For example ,clothe,eat food and so on. Next,parents should let children to go to social on the summer holiday .I think this a good method. Go to social do some work can exercise children's independent. Finaly,parents can let children to stay in shcool ,let theysefl care ownsefl.