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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1952
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

As long as you keep an open mind in the daily life,it is no far to find wasted phenomenon in the university campus. For instance, the trash can in the school canteen always remains many leftovers,which is totally a severe wasted phenomenon. As for phenomenon of wasting,We must take it seriously, thinking about the negative effect behind it. For one thing,, it's difficult for those who have formed the custom of wasting to get rid of it, so it may be do harm to their money management. For another, with the economy developing rapidly, our need to the natural recourse is also increasing. Faced with a lack of recourse, wasted phenomenon will be a barrier to economic development. As we all know, with a lot of disadvantages, waste must be abandoned.So We must take steps to avoid such phenomenon from now on. I will try my best to do it and set an example for other students.

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