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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
评语:

复杂句采用很棒;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多。

用户练习作文:

As is vividlly revealed in the picture,a father and a mother chat with thier kid on internet,even so they are at home.we can kown that the internet has a gerat impact on the way people communicate. With the advent of the internet,the communication between people becomes easier,in the meantime,it changes the way people communicate on,which is not beneficial for the relationship among people.Thus,in my own view,the electronic communication can never replace face-to-face contact.At the very least,people who talk face-to-face can get more information about others directly,such as,the emothion and the expression of other.On a deep lever,nowsday,electronic communication can no longer make us feel safe and comfortable,as there are lots of untrusted people and things on internet,so,people are more willing to chat face-to-face. Nomatter how fast the internet develope,or whatever convenice it brings to us.face-to-face contact can't fade out ,it is the mainly communication mode ,because only in this way can we have a deep understanding of person who we talk with.

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