Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Embroidery,which plays a pivotal role in the history of Chinese arts and artificiality,is a folk art with a pretty long history.The development of embroidery can't be separated from the promotion of cultivation and weaving.China is the first country discovering and using silk in the world since China has been fostering silkworm as early as 5000 years ago.As a consequence,the production of silk thread and silk commodity motivated the birth of embroidery.From then on,silk embroidery has spread all over China.What's more,the most significant embroidery is always considered to be from Jiangsu,Hunan,Sichuan and Guangdong province,with respectively distinctive characteristics.