Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文中从句数量过少;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;请注意分段。
Embroidery,which plays a pivotal role in the history of Chinese arts and artificiality,is a folk art with a pretty long history.The development of embroidery can't be separated from the promotion of cultivation and weaving.China that has been fostering silkworm as early as 5000 years ago is the first country discovering and using silk in the world .As a consequence,the production of silk thread and silk commodity give rise to the embroidery.From then on,silk embroidery has spread all over China.What's more,the most significant embroidery is always considered to be from Jiangsu,Hunan,Sichuan and Guangdong province,with respectively distinctive characteristics.