2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Embroidery,which plays a pivotal role in the history of Chinese arts and artificiality,is a folk art with a pretty long tradition.The development of embroidery can't be separated from the promotion of silkworm-raising and textiling.China that has been fostering silkworm as early as 5000 years ago is the first country discovering and using silk in the world.As a consequence,the production of silk thread and fabrics gives rise to the embroidery.From then on,silk embroidery has spread all over China.What's more,the most significant embroidery is always considered to be from Jiangsu,Hunan,Sichuan and Guangdong province,each with its respectively distinctive characteristics.