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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication Nowadays,more and more people communicate with friends through the Internet.There are many impacts on ineterpersonal communicatiao.People's opinions on this topic vary. Some people hold the view that Internet is harmful to interpersonal communication.We spend most our time on the Internet so that we don't have enough communication with our family.
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