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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12880
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Electronic communication cannot replace face-to-face contact As is vividly depicted in the above picture,the parents can only contact with their daughter who was at home via Internet.Nowadays,more and more people especially the youth tend to communicate with others by Internet rather than face-to-face. There is no denying the fact that Internet play an increasingly important role in our life.The electronic communication is convenient and efficient for us to exchange ideas and information.As an old saying goes:Every coin has two sides.Everything has its advantages and disadvantages and the electronic communication is no exception.For one thing,having a face-to-face contact can not only feel the spirit by others,but also close our relationship.For another thing,if we only communicate by computers,the ability of communication may decline as we always keep touch with others in the virtual life. In conclusion,electronic communication cannot replace face-to-face contact.Speaking is the unique skill that only belong to the human being.Therefore,it's necessary for us to hemit it.

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