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2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:45浏览次数:9981
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题目 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
说明 Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so.What is your opinion?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

There is an increasing develop of tourism recently ,but many problem go with it as well .as for me ,the booming tourism does harm to environment . Everyone knows that the success of the tourism will bring chance to economy development ,but few people know theta ecosystem has been destroyed gradually due to the tourist who throw rubbish anywhere ,carve the famous states for fun and pick up flowers or plant they want to have a look .moreover ,the volume of the ecosystem can not contain so much that the ability to clean itself is lost .that is to say ,the more you take ,the more you lose .and what we should do is to appeal tourist to obey nature ,protect nature and respect nature .only are we aware of that protecting environment is protecting the place we live in ,the importance of recovering ecosystem will be taken seriously . Tourism has both advantages and disadvantages,but today world should pay much attention to the affection that the tourism caused to environment .what we should do is to try our best to protect our nature when we develop the tourism .

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