2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Everyone wants to be a successful person.A successful person must have a strong will and powerful energetic.No one could achieve their targets with a fragile heart. A strong will is an important ingredient feature of succeed.Only the people who never give up even when they fail thousands of times can exceed themselves and accomplish the great business . An old saying goes to "God helps those who help themselves". Besides, students need to word hard on their business.They study knowledge and learn useful skills for their future. They must be very seriously on their study so that they could stand on their feet in this tough world. If they do not work hard, they can not be the elites .