Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Sichuan Opera,in which face changing is definitely a bright spot,is as touching and plentiful as Sichuan hotpot and other famous cuisine.It is said that in order to drive wild animals away,ancient people drew on their faces,which is lately absorbed by Sichuan Opera and promoted into an art.What'more,face changing is considered as a magical art for the reason that the actors need to change facial make-up more than ten times within 20 seconds.Through holding hands ,swaying sleeves and shaking hands,not only do the actors convey distinctive emotions using different facial make-up,but also express transparent mood through concrete facial make-up.