小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a girl friend,she has a beauty and bright eye,she has a good soul.we are know from our child,we go to school togerher go to play,we very closely,as time fast ,we grew audit,we have self family,her husband also my friend,we are very happy each other know,but one day i hate her because she hurt me that she lied me,she company her husband whoe said study and no more time company me, it is pity