拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays,the phenomenon of university ranking has become a heated discussion among people,while different people hold quite different opinions about this matters. On the one hand,people claim that it is meaningless to rank university in that there is no perfect standers for people to decide which is better.Whats more,students will take the results for granted that only accessing to the high- level universities can they have a bright future which probably lead to idleness.On the other hand,people hold the opposite view.Ranking university will prompt the development of the higher university and also stimulate the others to catch up.In addition,the higher university can set a good example to others,which benefit the development of harmony . As far as I'm concerned.as students,we are unnecessary to place much emphases on the results and should be diligent to attain our goals .
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