小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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There are a pictuer on the table, and Jim's family's photo.Have five peoples.this is he mother,she is a teacher. and this is he father, he is a policeman.This is he sister, she is a student. He mother is very tall. He father is very cool. Jim and his sister are in the same school. They are English.