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Recently, online shopping has become more and more popular today with the fast development of the Internet. Online shopping provides many advantages for people who are too busy to go to the shopping center. Besides, various kinds of styles of clothes are avaliable. More over, it's cheap price is also a attractive fator. However, every coin has two sides. Though it is very convenience, it's problem is also troblesome. In on thing, people cannot see the real goods that they don't know the quality of it. In the other, some unhonest trader might cheat the comsumers by excessive advertising. Therefore, I am in favour of the new way of buying, but, in the meantime, I think the goverment or some relevent department should set some regulations on it. And the traders should be honest and responsible for the comsumer.
