2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章词汇丰富度较好，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Recently, online shopping has become more and more popular today with the fast development of the Internet. Online shopping provides many advantages for people who are too busy to go to the shopping center. Besides, various kinds of styles of clothes are availiable. Moreover, it cheap price is also an attractive factor. However, every coin has two sides. Though it is very convenient, it's problem is also troublesome. In on thing, people cannot see the real goods that they don't know the quality of it. In the other, some unhonest trader might cheat the consumers by excessive advertising. Therefore, I am in favour of the new way of buying, but, in the meantime, I think the government or some relevant department should set some regulations on it. And the traders should be honest and responsible for the consumer.