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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6292
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮。

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I assume that the well-known saying"It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it." wound not alien to you. It evident that the trust between each other can be easily disappearing. Simple as saying may sound, it contains profound philosophy and reflects a kind of fact; that is we should spend much time on maintaining trust. On maintaining trust not only makes people feel worthwhile , but also encourages others when someone meet obstacle. A case point of the word famous writers Max and Engels, because of their trust for a long time, they accomplished the note of Capital. In order to make trust , i have the following plans. One the one hand, every single minute should be cherished because it is so precious. On the other hand, when making a choice, i will follow my heart and exert greatest efforts to achieve it. I insist that sticking to these plans a and keeping on learning will make my life different and meaningful.

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