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After reading this novel,I feel sorrowful, because the end is miserable, Gatsby is dead and Daisy is leave. Eventhough Gateby has nothing from begining to end. And I think that this novel is contact with the author’story. Gatsby was born in a poor family, his father is a peasant, but he has a dream,he thought he is different,and he want leave there. Once ,by chance,he get it which he help a captain from the storm. But when the captain dead, his family let gatsby left and give him nothing. Bacause of Gatsby join the army, so he met the Daisy who is beautiful and noble. They fall in love, but he has nothing so he want got money to marry with Daisy. Daisy not wait for him and marry with another noble man who are weathiness. Afterwards,her husband has a lover,but she can do nothing. At this point,gatsby come back and he want own Daisy.He make many party to attact Daisy, last he let Daisy’brother help him, so they met again. This moment, he also has weath,he has a glorious house, he flaunt his wealth for the Daisy. They fall in love again.It looks Gatsby do all things just for Daisy,he love her,deeply. Even give up his live. The book's wealth is embodied in Gatsby's mansion, as Gatsby display image in the eyes of the world is an empty shell, the house only have the soul of the people was Gatsby, Gatsby's heart has been worried about Daisy, all his things are basically close to Daisy as the center, to him, Daisy is the meaning of life, his soul can be said to be very empty, such a big house on such a soul is too big, so Gatsby let here every night Shengge night, let a lot of blank revellers fill the house, of course, Gatsby more practical purpose is to hope that Daisy will also appear at the party., in addition, such party to he is not important, the carnival of people won't listen to reason without destination of Carnival but is meaningless to gloss over, this big house like Gatsby's heart, generous space but only to Daisy alone, when Daisy first really came to his home, the house really seemed to glow the vitality, Gatsby also appeared for the first time to find his house in the sun "shine", he watched the daisy in the big hall Frolicking appearance, on Nick said: "she let here be full of vitality (splendid)", suddenly his luxury goods have been useful, he introduced his piano, he will be diversiform shirt thrown to her, and looked like he could take all the wealth to her, and in the and Daisy close after the meeting, the party also lost existence the significance of. When Gatsby died, the entire house with him in death. His wealth, fame, everything is like a bubble dispersed after his death, Gatsby such as night party are overcrowded, seems to network wide characters, after the death of even a funeral are not, in the party revelers who saw before, but to the next a party to the address, debauchery, lying vampire on schistosomiasis is not care about who are the people that, when people die, japonicum natural will turn to the next goal, although have so much wealth, Gatsby did not actually a friend. His wealth was ultimately unable to retain the daisy, become a basket case, finally collapsed Gatsby in order to see Daisy, spent five years from small people unknown to the public has become the super rich, how did he do it? The film has been asked this question, answer this question only "his work for Wu Fushan" this sentence, maybe his hard enough for "great", but the film did not show this point, in fact Wu Fushan is a casino but more let a person suspect Gatsby money's origin, his experience is very likely as the ideal of "American dream", a hard-working young man one day suddenly hit the jackpot, then jumped to the world, but the film did not go to the performance of this point, the audience not to experience his "successful" have what hardships. The film that Gatsby's "great", may only reflect in his love for daisy. But on the other hand, he is actually very common. Gatsby is a desire to upper class people, he never mentioned his poor parents, don't even acknowledge their existence, humble let his bones feel inferior, in the society he hide his life, even though he has become the super rich, the inferiority also did not disappear, because he is a hierarchical society, on a background evaluation of human society, one is full of all kinds of discrimination in society. He met Daisy when, on uniform masking his origin, he knows not himself worthy of her, when he entered the house when I heard her mother said:"...... So many glorious life young officer......" He thinks that, to get her to have born her deserved position, so he let himself into the super rich, he bought this house, when Daisy to visit his home, he shows her his rich life, his camera, his piano, he left to Daisy assorted kind of shirt is a naked to show off, he is not only a show of his wealth, but to show Daisy economy he has to be worthy of her, so there will be back and Daisy's husband Tom Buchanan that fight the rich nature of the car, he introduced Tom Buchanan only had a simple polo players in the Party (polo player), is to tell Daisy his identity is higher than her husband, although at the highest point in his life, his heart inferiority still exists, because he doesn't like other people well born, but from a poor family out, the movie has not avoided his inferiority. In Tom Buchanan to Gatsby and others, ridiculed the birth of Gatsby, showing his wealth ancestry, Gatsby finally unbearable, made only a fire. Gatsby fell for Daisy highborn, Nick says she is "golden girl", the standard Baifu beauty, but she is just a rich lady cannot withstand the wind and rain. Who does she love is also not clear. Indeed, in and Gatsby reunion after two people back, but if she knows Gatsby's true story? If Gatsby broke her if she still love him? Unable to find the answer, because she has been living a rich life, whether it is the husband Tom Buchanan or Gatsby also make every effort to provide for her in this life. She said to drop everything and Gatsby returned to his hometown, even planning to elope. She still between Gatsby and her husband, swing, until out of the accident. Hit her car person, be most willing to blame for her Gatsby top, cover for her, but let Gatsby into trouble, this time to elope plan was abandoned, she didn't go to Gatsby, but to seek help from her husband, because she didn't have the courage to face himself under the curse, it is easy to understand, in Gatsby's reputation may be damaged if to elope with him, no matter what your reputation will be damaged, and her husband have the ability to cover everything, in the face of Gatsby and keep his, she made choice of ordinary people will make. And there's Gatsby is still waiting for her phone, don't know Daisy had moved away, and it is moving, rather than escape responsibility. Gatsby's heart of love is so shattered, whether or not can withstand test. As you can see, this section of love with Gatsby's wealth, is an empty shelves, when rain came, it will fall. The poor guy even struggle to become tall, rich and handsome, Baifu beauty eventually chose the two rich generation, the poor boy and Baifu beauty love again good, also will burst into the phantom Daisy exquisite face, like a flower in the morning was wet with dew bud, tender, is the most easy flower. Fortunately Fitzgerald text permanently left such a beauty. She was beautiful, pure, delicate. No reason to doubt what the Gatsby why she fell in love with. I always think, if I were Gatsby, I will fall in love with such a beauty, but not to forget about one's own, so a moth. And it is his to forget about one's own, his fire, he proceed without hesitation, the achievements of his great, and let me be moved, long hard。 Dream, love, art, all good things are worth with lifetime. In the book, Gatsby belief that eternal light, while the green light distant and faint, but he still wants to fling caution to the winds to catch it. He use unscrupulous divisive tactics to obtain money, all lay lead a voluptuous life, only to regain former pure love, past lovers, but feel helpless lights have been covered with a thin layer of mist. Her voice is full of money. when he finally had to face the Daisy voice full of secular money to taste, to face the Daisy never seemed as he imagined pure woman, are bleak and refuse to continue to choose to love her. She is his old dreams, is a lifelong pursuit of the beautiful, that has changed, but if you give up this, but like to empty his most undefended most soft heart, destroying him have relied on just living faith. Perhaps from this moment on, his dream has be reduced to fragments, his love has Ashes To Ashes, he has already died, his death is the fate. In the battle of love, always just him alone in the fight a lone battle, day and night miss the people, she is so delicate Keren, cannot withstand a single blow, but it can be hard to push him into a doomed eternally. Daisy OK, just his imagination, he just a refuse to wake up the dream"The great Gatsby", what is remarkable, that is life, one time, even if only once, for his love, the pursuit of the dream to forget about one's own, all......