2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

Everyone is eager to be successful and there exist so many decisive factors on the way to success.Just as the saying goes:"all roads lead to Roman"and in my opinion,good preparation and good fortune are of importance to attain the goal. In the first place,success is only for those who prepared well and only when people set a goal can they keep a clear mind about the means to work hard and to overcome those obstacles and setbacks.Without enough preparations,they have no confidence in what they are doing.In the second place, good luck also plays a vital role both in working or life,and it is inclined to those who are diligent and are with a strong will so sometimes we really need good luck to success. From what I had said,we are easy to find that to be success need more efforts and skills and we also need good fortunes to promote us going on.