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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36856
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分53.0分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;运用了丰富的复杂句;文中词汇丰富度不足,拼写检查也要重视;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

I have a girl friend,she is very beauty.And better than all, there were young, softly rounded cheeks and bright eyes. She has a kind heart, we are known each other from our child,we go to school togerher go to play,we very closely,as time fast ,we grew audit,we have self family,her husband also my friend,we are very happy each other know,but one day I hate her because she hurt me that she lied me,she company her husband whoe said study and no more time company me, it is pity

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