2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success
字数:150满分:100分
文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Everyone is eager to be successful and there exist some decisive factors on the way to success.Just as the saying goes:"all roads lead to Roman"and in my opinion,good preparation and good fortune are of importance to attain the goal. In the first place,success is only for those who prepared well and only when people set a goal can they keep a clear mind about the means to work hard and to overcome those obstacles and setbacks.Without enough preparations,they have no confidence in what they are doing.In the second place, good luck also plays a vital role both in working or life,and it is inclined to those who are diligent and are with a strong will so sometimes goods lucks count to us. From what I had said,we are easy to find that to be success need more efforts and skills and we also need good fortunes to keep us going on.