2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

With the development of modern society,using cell phones is become more and more popular.From the picture we can see that mang people using phone when crossing the street.The phenomenon is become common sense. It is very dangerous for people to do this.First, life is valuable.We must concern ourselves. Second,it is easy to cause traffic jam,so we must careful.